People attend college or university for many defferent reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

University
or college is the main source of the
knowledge
and education.
In
Suggestion
By
past
university
or even schools are attended only by children of rich and noble people. But now everyone can get education regardless of their wealth or social status. Unlike schools most of universities or colleges
doesn’t have
Suggestion
don’t have
age restriction which means everyone can
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
. Everyone has their own reason for attending
university
. The
first
and main reason is education. Most of the
student
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students
attend
university
to increase their
knowledge
in some particular field. The high school graduates
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
to gain
knowledge
about the
career
that they
pursue
introduce
pose
for some of them
this
could be
last chance
Suggestion
the last chance
to study and some adult people who has job attend to increase their
knowledge
about their work to get
career
growth and etc.
Also while
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Also, while
studying
main course
Suggestion
a main course
the main course
in
university
students can learn about
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
subject related to their course and they can interact with their classmates.
Secondly some
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Secondly, some
people
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
enrolled
to get new experience and start
new
Suggestion
a new career
career
or change their current job. They might not like their current job and they want to study new more interesting for them field. Attending
university
teach
Suggestion
teaches
students to live and make a decision on their own. In conclusion
university
and
college
Suggestion
colleges
offer not only
career
but
also
the opportunity to have
new experience
Suggestion
new experiences
a new experience
and learn all kinds of things. I think these are the main reasons for attending universities.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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