People attend college or university for many defferent reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

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University

or college is the main source of the

knowledge

and education.

Suggestion

past

university

or even schools are attended only by children of rich and noble people. But now everyone can get education regardless of their wealth or social status. Unlike schools most of universities or colleges

doesn’t have

Suggestion

don’t have

age restriction which means everyone can

enroll

enrol

. Everyone has their own reason for attending

university

. The

first

and main reason is education. Most of the

student

Suggestion

students

attend

university

to increase their

knowledge

in some particular field. The high school graduates

enroll

enrol

to gain

knowledge

about the

career

that they

pursue

introduce

pose

for some of them

this

could be

last chance

Suggestion

the last chance

to study and some adult people who has job attend to increase their

knowledge

about their work to get

career

growth and etc.

Also while

Accept comma addition

Also, while

studying

main course

Suggestion

a main course

the main course

university

students can learn about

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

subject related to their course and they can interact with their classmates.

Secondly some

Accept comma addition

Secondly, some

people

enroll

enrol

enrolled

to get new experience and start

new

Suggestion

a new career

career

or change their current job. They might not like their current job and they want to study new more interesting for them field. Attending

university

teach

Suggestion

teaches

students to live and make a decision on their own. In conclusion

university

and

college

Suggestion

colleges

offer not only

career

but

also

the opportunity to have

new experience

Suggestion

new experiences

a new experience

and learn all kinds of things. I think these are the main reasons for attending universities.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

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237 words

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Overall Band Score

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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