Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days every single person has
a
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an
intelligent phone or even a tablet which
help
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helps
them in different ways, but the most common is the interaction. My approach is that it has more positive
critireas
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
criteria
creatures
which can be seen by each day and it helps create new relationships on the way too. The
first
and most important reason why is because you can know others more.
For instance
, the young people prefer making an online friendship and wait two or three months before knowing the other person face-to-face.
Although
, a great development of
friendhood
before
know
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knowing
them in real life can help to have a
trustable
Capable of being tested or proved
testable
and understanding
envioronment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
with the time. Maybe in the future people will prefer
only talking
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to only talk
in social media than do it in a restaurant or a house. Related to
this
first
reason another benefit of the technology is to keep in touch all the time. Nowadays, according to a scientific study it is estimated that more people prefer to take
roadtrips
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road trips
by
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
to explore other countries than be with more people. Meanwhile, their families can be worried about what they are doing and when they are going to be back, because of
this
the telephones make a huge resource with sensational results because in one
second
a text is
send
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sent
and in minutes you have the answer. The relationship and the communication the family and the
traveler
a person who changes location
traveller
has will never break, thanks to the technology. In conclusion, the new technology has a mesmerize result in our days with a positive progress of how people interact like
know
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knowing
others more and keep in touch all the time.

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