In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Food

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is one of

most crucial requirement

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the most crucial requirement

for human beings. Too much intake of

junk

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food

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results in various

health

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issues in humans. I completely accord that fast

food

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should be taken as a taxable item as it spreads

lot

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lots

of diseases, if consumed excessively. To embark on, in the past era, there was only one source of income from the male member of the family, so women were used to prepare meals and thought it as the core responsibility of herself, which in turn help other family members to enjoy home made

food

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.

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, there was a good rate of healthy people.

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, due to

dual earnings

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the dual earnings

of both men and women these days, the concept of preparing meals at home has been cut off up-to

large extent

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a large extent

due to the busy schedule

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It has been observed that people prefer to have fast

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rather than cultural

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as it is easily available and does not require much

efforts

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effort

and cost. These

individual

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individuals

are not aware that

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has an adverse effect on their

health

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,

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if more tax could be

apply

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applied

by

Government

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the Government

,

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junk

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food

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can be avoided effectively.

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, in

turn will

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turn, will

make the nation and people healthy and wealthy.

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, we are the teachers or followers for the upcoming generation,

as a result

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, if we ourselves become

health

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conscious, it would help

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next generation

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the next generation

to be the same. People might opt for

junk

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food

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once in a blue moon for a change, but should not

make

engage in

do

it as a routine, as it impacts their

health

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badly by causing

lot

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a lot

of diseases

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as obesity,

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poisoning and reduces immunity of an individual. To conclude, there is a need of raising awareness amongst people about the demerits of

junk

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food

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and applying more tax on

such

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food

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items to make our citizens healthy.