News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to write in newspaper. What factors influence these decisions? Do you think we become used to bad news? Should more good news be reported?

News has become an important aspect of daily life and television and newspapers have influenced the public.
However
, whatever news telecast on television and print in newspapers it is decided by
news
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news editors
the news editor
editor
and there are many factors that influence on their decision. I will examine some factors and impact of negative news as well as reported be good news in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are two factors that effects
on
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of
editor decision
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the editor's decision
editor's decision
. The
first
and the predominant factor is that publicity and profits. Most of the news channels are under the private organisation and they want to earn more money and they think that bad news
grab
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grabs
more attention.
Secondly
, the preference of public. In
this
contemporary era, individuals want to know more things about the world so that all editors to find continually new information about the world.
Next
, I believe that if television and
newspapers broadcast
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newspapers, broadcast
as well as write to bad news
then
definitely the negative impact on teenagers behaviour with
this
they can involve in bad activities
such
as cyber crime and gambling.
For instance
, a recent research has revealed that, in America, on 2015, 30% crime were committed who continuously watching bad news.
Moreover
, news
editor
should more good news were reported because bad news makes us worry and sad whereas good news give us happiness.
In addition
,
mostly
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most
news
are related
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is related
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to
renowned person and
the the
definite article
the
majority of the people follow their news so if good news would be broadcast
then
the positive impact on youngsters. In conclusion,
although
there are so many factors which influence on
editor choice
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the editor's choice, however
the editor's choice however
editor's choice however
however
it is essential for
editor
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editors
an editor
to telecast and print good news as it impacts on
young generation
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the young generation
.
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