All over the world, societies are facing a growing problems with obesity. This problem effect to the children and adults. What are the reasons for this? and how could it be tackle.

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this
developing
days
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day
, the
problem
of obesity has been increasing
from
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for
children and adults age. I will discuss intends of what are the causes of
this
phenomenon and how to ameliorate
this
problem
. There are a number of reasons for an increasing obesity issue. One of the biggest
problem
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problems
is that most of the people depended on
the fast
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faster
food
rather than homemade
food
.
In other words
, in
this
fast-moving days, a majority of people who cannot have time to cook in their home, that’s why they all are eaten a street or hotel foods.
For example
, the recent survey from world health organization, researchers say that 65% of people around the world who avoided healthy
food
on a daily basis.
To solved
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Solve
this
problem
, all
community
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communities
must be followed by their
important
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importance
and healthier diet plane schedules, as well as government
should be bend
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should bend
on the unhealthy
food
for eating it. Another issue is that most of the
societies
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society
being
lazier
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lazy
and they should be avoided
to
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by
doing exercises.
That is
to say, in
this
technology
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technological
era, by using some gadget, people can do any types difficult work without doing any types of hard work out, as well as the majority of
student
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students
prefer to
playing
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play
be playing
have played
e-game in mobile or computer rather than going outside their home.
For example
, the world heaviest human is
juan
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Juan
gone
pedro
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Pedro
, who has been a
fatty
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fat
person for their laziness. The way forward could
be to improve some
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be improve some
types of exercise facility in all the city and it’s must be used by near living people for every day. To put it in a nutshell, I pen
down saying
Accept comma addition
down, saying
that the fast
food
and being a lacier
people both
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people, both
person both
person person both
are responsible for obesity
from
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for
children and adults. My point of view the main responsibility for solving
this
problem
lies with their government and them self.
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