While , some individuals believe that people feel unsafe at their a residence and also when they outside. There are several factors and solutions. I would discuss these both views in upcoming paragraph .

Firstly

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the reason why people are afraid of going out of their homes are very obvious

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The

crime

committed on

streets

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the streets

are on a rise. The road accident

have risen

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has risen

to a proportion. It

increase

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increases

more

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

before

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As well as individuals becoming scared within their

home

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Mostly the crimes being committed at houses

for

instance murder

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instance, murder

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robberies,

etcetera

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secondly some

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Secondly, some

Secondly some

people are afraid to go out because of natural calamities and

also

sometimes due to health related disorders which might be caused

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by

pollution.

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a recent news article describe that more crimes committed by domestic help at

people

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peoples'

peoples

homes than the

crime

being committed on the streets

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addition everyday

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addition to everyday

people see news about

terror attacks

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the terror attacks

so they avoid

to go

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going

outside

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Therefore

mankind

feel

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feels

insecure on

streets

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the streets

and

also

at

home

because they about domestic

crime

in

newspaper

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the newspaper

newspapers

a newspaper

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moreover

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Moreover, government

Moreover government

government

and individuals take steps for

make

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making

people more safe and protected. The rising unemployment is the main reason of

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these crimes

this crime

crime

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it will helpful to reduce

crime

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Furthermore, government

Furthermore government

government

increase security in public area by camera and more police patrolling

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This

need is

also

in the residence area. The

last

but not least thing is that

government

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the government

should strictly punished the criminals

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it

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It

will incredible change to decrease the

crime

on the streets and at

home

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people use technology in security system. In the conclusion, nowadays individuals

are not feel

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are not feeling

do not feel

are not felt

comfortable at

home

and outside They afraid

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of

crime

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so

to a very great extent or degree

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government

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the government

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provides

good facilities

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