Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.Do you think it is positive or negative developments?

While, universities use the technology because, nowadays, online courses are provided by universities.
Moreover
, in universities, these days teachers teach the students through projectors
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In other words
,
education system
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the education system
is doing incredible things day by day
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It has both pros and cons. Now I would describe both the views in the following paragraphs. Education lays the foundation stone for success.
Firstly
, online courses are very beneficial for people of all age groups.
secondly
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Secondly
, people live a hectic life so a lot of them choose online courses. Especially, those students who have come to another city for their jobs; they prefer the online courses because it is time saving. They can
study
at their home
also
after work
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On the other hand
, those people
study
online courses who can not go to expensive cities and are far away from their home.
Lastly
, I think classroom
study
is worthwhile rather than online
study
. Since if you have doubt on any topic
then
,
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you can ask from your teachers face to face. If you are studying in campus
then
you will learn how to be punctual. You will learn how to be disciplined as well as be better at communication. You can
also
human interaction
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on
campus which does not happen during online
study
. To sum up
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in my opinion, campus
study
is much more advantages rather than online
study
. As I already discussed above that one will be serious about attending the class regularly
instead
of online
study
.
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Online
study
will provide more
knowledge but
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knowledge, but
classroom
study
will correct a person's mistakes and clear his doubts.
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