Some people feel the it always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance, in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for he animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate and give your opinion.

Many hold the opinion that creatures should not be trapped in places other than their natural habitats. While others believe that
this
set up
equipment designed to serve a specific function
setup
is advantageous for both the animals and people.
This
essay will explore both sides of
this
argument, followed by a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, trapping animals in cages is an abomination of their rights and natural evolution.
This
is because, they are not made to live in captivity, they are made to roam free in vast lands and develop primitive instincts like predator and
pray
a person who is the aim of an attack (especially a victim of ridicule or exploitation) by some hostile person or influence
prey
charactertistics
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
characteristics
characteristic
.
This
is
exempliefied
be characteristic of
exemplified
by, tigers kept in zoos that are
further
released into the wild after decades of captivity. They become unable to hunt because they are accustomed to being fed
everyday
Suggestion
every day
at a certain time,
in addition
to
this
, they often do not survive and end up dying from lack of basic
animals
Suggestion
animal's
animal
skills.
On the other hand
, in some cases, it becomes an imperative for human intervention.
Although
it is
immorale
deliberately violating accepted principles of right and wrong
immoral
immortal
moral
, but sometimes the mammalian at hand is sick
,
Accept space
,
dying or facing extinction.
Moreover
, their only means of survival are with the aid of professionals
such
as, vets and experts.
For example
, the white tiger, who was facing extinction in 2003, has overcome
this
threat after multiple conservation schemes in Thailand and central parts of Africa. Through these schemes White Tiger's were put under a microscope, and transported to
large field
Suggestion
a large field
where they were protected and their reproduction was assisted. Overall, conserving their population,
this
can be seen in many more instances. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe, if the creature under question is under no direct threat of extinction or dying out
then
it should not be put behind bars.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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