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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

#museums #charge #admission #people
Nowadays, museums are the only places to know in depth of our heritage and ancestral daily routines. As there is no other better option to know or watching the great creation of our past. In my opinion, I believe it is spending
small amount
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a small amount
 to know our history. As it will reduce
burden
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the burden
 of maintaining museums on governments. While other museums where there is no charges to visit, it is not that well maintained or a paid guide Museums are very costly to maintain, as there are many things to keep safe and they are very precious. There are various things in the museums to look after and maintain without losing the originality. One good example is Museum in the state of
Hyderabad India
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Hyderabad, India
, which consist of the Great Nizam’s complete empire clothing’s and the huge military
armors
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armed
arms
armours
 with various kinds of weapons which were used
on
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at
 that time, are maintained by the government of Hyderabad state. By charging
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a small amount
from
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of
 the visitors create a seriousness and the importance of the museums
into
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in
 the visitors mind.
On the other hand
, Free museums are not well maintained and not are not in a proper
standards
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standard
. As there is a need to look after and proper maintains of our history. By not charging money from the visitors it is very difficult to bear cost to look after the whole museum.
Such
 as, Shiviji museum is free of
charge but
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charge, but
 the museum is not well organized and there is no one to give the in depth information about the special events of that time. To conclude, for the best experience paid museums are better in many ways. As they are well maintained and organized. While, free museums will not
do
engage in
make
 that much impact on the person’s mind as they are not that much
well
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
 look after. Though there are
draw backs
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
 of
charging but
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charging, but
 advantages are more for paid museums.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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