Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?

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Diversity is the asset of many countries as they open their arms to

immegrants

a person who comes to a country where they were not born in order to settle there

immigrants

and visitors from all over the world.

Governments

Suggestion

The governments

of these countries should make every effort to ensure that all people regardless of their origin are living together

consistantly

in a systematic or consistent manner

consistently

constantly

. One method to

achive

to gain with effort

achieve

that is

by teaching

forign

of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)

foreign

cultures and languages in schools, as making the children learn about other

cultures enables

Accept comma addition

cultures, enables

them to maintain an open mind when dealing with other nationalities and learning other languages will help in decreasing the linguistic

parriers

a structure or object that impedes free movement

barriers

with

forigners

a person who comes from a foreign country; someone who does not owe allegiance to your country

foreigners

Moreover

, the governments can provide maps in several languages for free to aid people when moving through the city.

Furthermore

, posting videos and educational materials for domestic citizens on how to deal with different points of view and how to accept other cultures and religions

with out

in absence of

without

prejudice can help in reducing some the

parriers

a structure or object that impedes free movement

barriers

that might be encountered.

Finally

, governments can help in providing and building places for

worshipers

a person who has religious faith

worshippers

from all over the world to able to practice their religion freely and without restrictions.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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