The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates information had
constitute
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constituted
in
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between
2005 and 2015 about
Someland
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Some land
main exports. It
also
indicates future projections for 2025. According to the data, it
is seem
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seems
that the international
tourism
will increase in 2025 unlike the other two productions who were shown
in
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to
decrease in the future.
Moreover
, in 2005, the international
tourism
were
also
siginficantily
in a statistically significant way
significantly
higher with over than 6
usd
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USD
bilion followed
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billion, followed
billion followed
boiling followed
by dairy products which was around 5
bilion
the number that is represented as a one followed by 9 zeros
billion
. While, the meat products were the lowest
.
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.
In contrast
to 2005. In 2015
,
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,
the dairy products were the highest with
approximetale
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
approximate
8
bilion which
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billion, which
billion which
is 3
time
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times
more or less than the meat products.
However
, the international
tourism
has growing
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has grown
about 1
bilion
the number that is represented as a one followed by 9 zeros
billion
than it was in 2005. In conclusion
,
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,
it is clear that in
somelands
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some lands
the prime export is the international
tourism
. As reported by the chart, the international
tourism
had
rise
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risen
since 2005 and it will continue rising in the future to reach the highest point 8 billion
dollar
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dollars
.
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