The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates information had constitute in 2005 and 2015 about

Someland

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Homeland

main exports. It

also

indicates future projections for 2025.

According to

the data, it is

seem

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seen

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that

the

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apply

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international

tourism

will increase in 2025

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unlike the other two productions

who

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which

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were shown

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decrease

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a decrease

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in the future.

Moreover

, in 2005,

the

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apply

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international

tourism

were

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was

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also

siginficantily

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significantly

higher with over

than

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apply

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usd

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USD

bilion

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billion

followed by dairy

products

which

was

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were

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around 5

bilion

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billion

While

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the meat

products

were the lowest .

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to 2005. In 2015 ,

the

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dairy

products

were the highest with

approximetale

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approximately

bilion

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billion

which is 3

time

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times

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more or less than

the

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apply

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meat

products

However

the

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international

tourism

has

growing

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about

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by about

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bilion

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billion

than

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more than

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it was in 2005. In conclusion,

it is clear that

somelands

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some lands

homelands

the prime export is

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international

tourism

. As reported by the chart,

the

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international

tourism

had

rise

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risen

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since 2005 and it will continue rising in the future to reach the highest point 8 billion

dollar

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dollars

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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that newspapers are the best way to read the news. others, however, think that websites are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?