Some people believe public libraries are not important for people, others disagree about this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that the society needs
variety
Suggestion
a variety
of public
infrastuctures
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructures
to grow and progress. While some believe that
infrastucture
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
like
library
are not as important as others are, I would agree with those who argue that
this
utility is
also
equally
contrubute
bestow a quality on
contribute
contributed
contributes
in the development of the society.
Firstly
, the main purpose of
library
Suggestion
the library
libraries
is to provide books and space for reading. But, in fact, in
last few decade
Suggestion
the last few decades
last few decades
,
information
technology has
adavanced
farther along in physical or mental development
advanced
in leaps and bounds, and thanks to
this
amelioration, we can store ample amount of books in our mobile and computer.
For instance
, with the
mordern
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
Modern
tools like
internet
Suggestion
the internet
and smart phones, one can access desired
information
any time at his own comfort, which is not the same in case with
library
.
Hence
, significance of
library
Suggestion
the library
libraries
has been diminished by the
contemorary
characteristic of the present
contemporary
information
technology.
However
, I believe that
library
Suggestion
the library
is not only a critical component of
education system but
Suggestion
the education system, but
the education system but
also
plays a crucial role in community services. The reason for
this
is that it imparts
knowldge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
of various
genre
Suggestion
genres
to the members of
community
Suggestion
the community
who are not friendly with modern-day technology, namely elderly people. Apart
form
a giver or sender
from
this
, it is
also
used as
space
Suggestion
a space
for social gathering where regional and cultural functions take
palce
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
.
For example
, district
library
of Vadodara has collection of wide range of scriptures, which is
regulary
in a regular manner
regularly
accessed by senior people for learning new things.
Moreover
, it hosts the annual literature festival as well.
Thus
, if these places were not given adequate importance,
then
it would jeopardise the
palce
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
peace
police
for social gathering and hinder adult education. In conclusion,
although
the recent development has
change
Suggestion
changed
the way we stored
information
and access them, I believe that the role
library
play in our society is intact as it continues to
spead
distribute or disperse widely
spread
knowledge and provide space to perform cultural gathering.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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