Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.

It is a
graving
relating to or suitable for growth
growing
issue that, nowadays, people do not know the family living
next
door properly as they used to do earlier.
This
essay will put
forward two
Accept comma addition
forward, two
factors which
has accelerated
Suggestion
have accelerated
this
problem and proposed measures which might address them. The main culprit of
this
phenomenon is that people are overwhelmed with their office
work load
work that a person is expected to do in a specified time
workload
and responsibilities.
This
is because the present generation is in
rat
Suggestion
the rat
-race of building their career.
As a result
, they are spending more time in office than home.
Hence
, they
are not left
Suggestion
don't leave
with enough time to explore their neighbourhood. To tackle
this
issue,
campaign
Suggestion
a campaign
the campaign
should be run by
non profits
not commercially motivated
nonprofits
which explain the importance of work-life balance and advantages of strong neighbourhood to major
corporates
Suggestion
corporations
corporate
aswell employees
Suggestion
as well as employees
as well employees
.
Moreover
, local communities can
also
work as catalyst by
arrenging
the act of arranging and adapting a piece of music
arranging
small gathering
Suggestion
the small gathering
, which invite office-goers to spend time with nearby residents. Moving to the other factor,
this
pressing problem is increasing because of
diversity
Suggestion
the diversity
among society where people
form
a giver or sender
from
different culture and race live
togather
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
. It is
tendency
Suggestion
the tendency
a tendency
of
human psych
Suggestion
the human psyche
the human psych
that they presumed apprehension for
unkown
not known
unknown
things and practice;
therefor
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
, they hesitate to welcome and mingle with neighbours having dissimilar culture.
However
, with proper counter measures
this
soft-spot can be made biggest strength of society. The government should run
awarenss
having knowledge of
awareness
programmes which inculcate tolerance and educate about different cultures.
Thus
, public apprehension about
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
culture might be
demolish
Suggestion
demolished
. In
longer
Suggestion
the long
long
the longer
run,
this
practice will build trust among communities. In conclusion, two of the main neighbourhood related concerns are intensely busy schedule and increase of diverse societies.
However
, these problems can be mitigated via emphasising work-life balance and educating people about other cultures and race.
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