Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the causes people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?”

Since old times,
big mass
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big masses
a big mass
the big mass
of
society
has
been in a rat
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been a rat
race of looking fitter and younger than they
actualy
in actual fact
actually
are.
This
essay will explore reasons for
this
obsession and explain why we should welcome
this
trend. Of all various reasons
which made people to
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which made people
do the things that make them look younger, one is
youth obsessed mindset
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a youth obsessed mindset
the youth obsessed mindset
in
society
. The reason for
this
is that physical appearance is so crucial that it decides people’s social status;
therefore
, to make themselves presentable and convivial, they try to look younger. A/The
second
factor is that they do not want to get old. So, they hide the signs of aging to feel as young as a teenager.
For instance
, many people often visit
gymnasium
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the gymnasium
a gymnasium
to overcome ageing effects and feel young. In my view,
this
trend has positive ramifications on
society
as well as on
economy
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the economy
.
Firstly
, as explain above, these folk take better care of
themselve
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
by visiting gymnasium, doing yoga and eating healthy food, which help them to prevent
efftects
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the effects
effects
of ageing.
As a result
, overall healthiness of
this
class of people improves, which is
good sign
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a good sign
for
society
as a whole.
Secondly
, these people often buy cosmetics items like dye and anti-ageing cream to diminish
effects
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the effects
of age on their body.
This
consumerism helps to strengthen the economy of the country,
thus
it should be welcome. In conclusion, two of the major factors that influence the drive for fighting against ageing are forever beautiful mentality of
society
and self desire for everlasting youth. To my mind,
this
trend has advantages like increase in healthier population and impetus to
cosmetics industry
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the cosmetics industry
.

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