Many people believe that social networking sites like Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In these days, with the advent of technology, social networking sites
such
as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram are becoming increasingly popular. Some masses believe that these sites have a negative impact on the individuals and the community. I agree with the notion that social networking sites have a negative
effects
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effect
and explain reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, there
are
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is
reason
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a reason
the reason
why social networking sites have
adverse impact
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an adverse impact
on individuals. The
first
and the predominant reason is that
people
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peoples'
relationships have become shallow. Most of the individuals spend a lot of
time
online so they do not have
time
to visit their friends or relatives.
For example
, in the past
time
people used to get together at least once a month, but nowadays most of the folks do not know many of their relatives.
Hence
, there
are
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is
no close relationship in
this
era.
Moreover
, there are
also
negative effect on the local community. The majority of the people waste hours in front of laptops or smartphones chatting on Facebook with
this
they fail to pay attention to their work.
For instance
, students do not perform
best
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better
in exams because they spend more
time
on computers or mobile
instead
of studying.
As a result
, social networking sites hinder the progress of the community. In conclusion,
although
Facebook and other sites have their own
merits
Accept comma addition
merits, however
however
, l
strongly agree
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strongly agrees
that social networking sites have more detrimental effects on both the individuals and society. People ought to used properly so that they obtain more merits rather than demerits.
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