A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.

It is common belief that having a mixture of nationalities allows a country to develop more quickly and make it more interesting. In my perspective, I completely agree
this
view for many reasons. One of the most worth-mentioning reason is multicultural. When people who is from foreign countries immigrate to a country like the USA, they
also
take their culture into one.
This
can lead to a various
lifestyles
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lifestyle
which reflect their characteristics. That can make people more exciting and freedom to choose what things are suitable for them.
For example
, people live in
highly diversity area
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a highly diverse area
highly diverse area
, they can easier to choose traditional cuisine that they like.
Moreover
, they
can talk different
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can talk to different
people in their communities, thereby improving their ability to communicate more effectively in a variety of contexts. Another reason why I hold
this
view is advantages for local companies. It can be seen that each ethnic group
have
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has
different strengths. Indeed, if a company need to
overcomes
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overcome
some problems that they face in the market, they should aggregate all opinions.
As a result
, each person can give a comment which
base
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bases
is based
on their experiences, including the strengths in their culture. Following that, the manager can easier to analysis what it can solve for each problem.
Furthermore
, in order to spread products or services to other countries, the
corporate
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corporation
would ask their staff who was born and raise in these countries about life and culture. By doing it, the can understand local citizen, making logical strategy in their business plan. In conclusion, I strongly believe that a combination immigrants
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of
nationalities can
provides
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provide
many benefits for a country.
This
is due to the abundant
life it
Accept comma addition
life, it
creates and help local people develop their
economic
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economies
economy
.
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