In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?

Today's

world

is changing rapidly and so are the people living in today's

world

. Perhaps in

this

fast growing

world there

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world, there

is a lot of external and internal pressure on students (mostly kids or teenagers).

Most important factor

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Most important factors

influencing suicides could be

the tough

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tougher

the toughest

competition. There is immense competition now a

days

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day

in children studying in schools in order to get higher grades than one

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

. They are mostly pressurised by their parents and relatives. When a child is not able to match the expectations of his/her beloved ones, they take it to their head and take harsh decisions for themselves.

However

, the consequences of

such

decisions are to be faced by their closed ones after they are no more in

this

world

. Punishments is not a way to settle

this

problem as teenagers are mere kids who have just entered another stage of their life, where they have to face competition and they are expected to be competent enough to come out with flying colours.

However

,

its

it is

it's

not everyone's cup of tea, too much of pressure is extremely laborious to handle for children of

this

age. The parents should act like guides and they should be

frinedly

characteristic of or befitting a friend

friendly

enough with their children so that the they do not hesitate to talk about their problems with their parents. The problem can easily be solved by taking proper interventions. Everyone has problems in their

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

life

, we all struggle

everyday

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every day

in our

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

life

and in order to

succeed we

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succeed, we

make

sacrifises

endure the loss of

sacrifices

and we work hard with determination and

enthusiams

a feeling of excitement

enthusiasm

. " What doesn't kill you makes you stronger"

this

is the lesson that has to be taught to every child after getting into the teenage and the parents play a vital role in phrase as it is said that parents are the best teachers. To recapitulate, I do not agree that teenagers should receive the same adult punishment which criminals receive. In my opinion, you just need to boost up their confidence again and help them out with their problems in order to get them back on track.