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Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

#stress #illness
It is irrefutable that
stress
 related
illness
 are increasing rapidly. In
this
 essay I
intent
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intend
 to discuss its
causes including
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causes, including
 increased working hours and bad
diet
.
This
 essay will
further
 explore some solutions to increased
stress
 related
illness
, like
work
-life balance and
good healthy
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a good healthy diet
diet
. In
this
 competitive world, people are supposed to
work
 hard to maintain or to get a higher position. An Important reason for burgeoning
stress
-related
illness
 is that in a typical corporate world People are assigned with more jobs than their capacity due to which they are enforced to
work
 for extra hours. For instant companies fire their employees if they failed to meet their sales target. Sometimes people choose to climb the corporate ladder for social status at a cost of imbalanced
work
 life. Another main reason for
stress
 related
illness
 is that people are less conscious for their eating habits. We are living in a consumerist
culture
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culture, therefore
therefore
 to meet with their needs people are becoming workaholic. So people are less
concentrating
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concentrated
 on their
diet
 and becoming more reliable on ready cooked food
instead
 of homemade healthy
diet
. To resolve the issue
under consideration one
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under consideration, one
 should reach
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 the roots.
Firstly people
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Firstly, people
 should themselves decide their
work
 balance ratio and
also
 give priority to their family, friends and relatives.
Secondly along
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Secondly, along
 with
work
 people should spend their few hours of a day for some physical exercise, meditation,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
 and
also
 follow healthy eating habits.
Thirdly and
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Thirdly, and
 most
importantly government
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importantly, government
 should
also
 form some rules and regulations maximum working hours, balanced working life and human rights. In recapitulation, I reiterate that in
this
 fast life
style
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style, stress
stress
 related
illness
 are rapidly growing.
This
 essay discussed main reasons for
this
 are increased
work
 pressure and wrong eating styles.
Further
also
 suggested some ideas to resolve
this
 problem in twofold: focusing on
work
-life balance and healthy food
diet
 plans.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stress-related illnesses
  • rapid pace
  • pressure
  • balance
  • omnipresent
  • information overload
  • disconnect
  • economic uncertainties
  • job insecurity
  • financial stress
  • environmental factors
  • chronic stress
  • work-life balance
  • flexible working hours
  • mental health
  • support programs
  • physical activity
  • healthy eating habits
  • awareness
  • accessibility
  • counseling
  • stress management
  • community environment
  • reconnect with nature
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