Some people believe that in 100 years time life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this. What is your opinion?

The
future
is uncertain, since the industrial revolution, there has been a rapid shift in lifestyle. It is difficult to predict whether life will be easier or tougher in the
next
100 years. In my opinion, life will be much more
difficults
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss the same in my essay. With advent of the internet and technology boom, there has been a drastic shift in not only how we operate but
also
communicate with
eachother
Suggestion
each other
and with the world around us. Self-driving cars, restaurants using robots as servers are ready to take off. With more and more automation, life for those who can afford it will
definetly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
become easier, but for the majority of the population around the world, which is already struggling to make ends meet,
this
will cause more problems
then
solutions. It is said that in
future
, a major chunk of jobs will be lost due to automation making human resource redundant. Unemployment will result in poverty for the working class whilst industries and consumerism will flourish.
Furthermore
, climate change will still be an issue considering presently, there is no way to slow it down. If we keep following the current trends, our dependance on fossil fuels will be detrimental to our health and the health of our planet. Industrial pollution will continue to disintegrate the ozone layer and greenhouse effect will
multply
combine by multiplication
multiply
ultimately resulting in extreme weather changes and food shortage. Will the
planet even
Accept comma addition
planet, even
be habitable in the
next
100 years?
However
, if we are successful in finding solutions to the issues stated above, we still have to consider the effect the internet will have on the
future
generations. Can those born after 2030
be
Suggestion
are
expected to live in the world where physical human interaction is normal and
doesnt
does not
doesn't
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the mental state of individuals? Only time will tell.
Hence
, with the current trends, the
future
doesn't look very
rosey
reflecting optimism
rosy
racy
, and could lead to
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
being more difficult unless we find solutions to our present problems.

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