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Band 7

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employer agency. In your letter: Introduce Yourself Explain what sort of job you would like Say what experiance and skills you have

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in any part-time job at your organisation. I am Alishan Ali, a graduate student at Dalhousie University, completing my final year in a Master's in Applied Computer Science. I would be very interested in a part-time role
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 associated with AI implementation. Recently, AI has got a good limelight around the world, every industry wants to use AI in some capacity.
This
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 job will complement me to complete my research work at school. In the
last
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 three years, I worked as an IT Consultant, learned some latest technology and brushed up my soft skills. Certainly, my past experience gave me an insight into the upcoming trending skills that would be in demand. I would kindly request that if you come across
such
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 a role, please inform me
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 we can discuss more about it on a virtual meeting. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Alishan Ali

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structure
Use three clear parts: intro, body, and end. Put one main idea in each part so the writing is easy to read.
greeting
Start with a polite greeting like 'Dear Sir or Madam' and end with a neat closing. This keeps the form right.
paragraphing
Try to make a new idea in a new paragraph for easy flow.
content
Give a clear goal for the job you want and add a short skill or two that fit the role. Also say what you will do next.
tone
Keep a calm and polite tone. Use simple words and careful grammar.
tone
Polite and formal tone.
content
Shows you study and past work that can help the job.
content
Says how the job fits your study.
form
Good opening and closing.
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