Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people wonder about
advertisement
. Some people think that it has
negative impact
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a negative impact
in
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on
our life.
However
, others said it has been playing as positive effect on
this
world.
This
is not an easy essay to be answered, but I will look at
this
issue. Why
advertisement
has been playing a negative effect in our
life
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lives
?
Accept space
?
Of Course for several reasons:
firstly
, it motivates the psychological point in everyone, and women
in particular
. They will run to buy
this
advertised
product especially
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product, especially
if it’s from cosmetic roof, just to show their beauty to men, which may lead to negative effects of too much sexual attention.
Secondly
, you can sit comfortably with your family and suddenly the telephone is ringing, but it’s nothing important, it’s just another company try to convince you to buy one of their products. It is a real intrusive example of
advertisement
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an advertisement
.
Lastly
, sometimes you do not have the financial ability to buy something, but with these new methods of
advertisement
, you will run to buy it, which will affect your budget.
On the other hand
, there are some good sides to advertising.
For instance
, it compares the prices of many companies which benefit the consumer.
Besides
, it really opens our vision to see more products which we do not
knowit
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know it
unless the TV or Radio advertised them.
In addition
to, it breaks our daily routine and allows us to see new faces and learn the language better with the help of the daily updates they deliver through
advertisement
. In conclusion, as we can see there are many aspects
to
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of
this
essay. I feel that we gain no benefits at all from
advertisement
, it plays on
minds
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the minds
of people buy more things that they do not need it at all.
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