Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the advent of Digitalization in all streams, high-tech media has changed aspects of our lives in a rapid and effective way. Some people brace the idea of libraries offering softwares, videos or DVDs apart from books, whereas many are hostile to the proposal of having the same. I tend to agree that libraries must be equipped with

such

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high-tech media devices. To start with, these days people

have moved

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move

are moving

on from old fashioned traditional ways of reading, to new age gadgets which not only saves time but

also

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helps them in fetching advanced knowledge without extra efforts. A telling example is a student preferring to search meaning of a word on

internet

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the internet

and can read a lot about it rather than searching catalogues or dictionaries available in the library. Considering the same, it can be seen that people are inclined towards innovations and new styles.

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, different people have different individual preferences.

Still there

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Still, there

are many people, who prefer to read

hard copy

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a hard copy

of the book in the

silence

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silent

zone while sitting on the arm chair.

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, many still

feels

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feel

that reading books on

computer

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the computer

a computer

will deteriorate their

eyesite

normal use of the faculty of vision

eyesight

and are not willing to move on to computers.

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, to a few using

computer

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computers

without librarian assistance is, in

itself is

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itself, is

a monstrous task to them. One could draw the

conculsion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

that high-tech media

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are

a part of our life now. Public libraries should accept the preferences of both

type

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types

of readers and should provide the

felixibilty

the property of being flexible; easily bent or shaped

flexibility

, and leave it

upto

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up to

the people to opt the medium they prefer.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

262 words

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Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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