Advertisements are influencing us in a negative way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that a globe is unimaginable without broadcast. In fact, it is omnipresent.
some
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Some
people believe that
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an advertisement
is
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a negative impact
on individuals.
However
, I differ from them and opine that literature is a good source of used by purchase the product in the market.
Thus
, I firmly disagree with the statement presented. I elucidate my stand in the following paragraph. The
first
and predominant reason for supporting the concept of
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the commercial
is provide the information on goods and services. By the advice of promotion folks gain ability about the new products and improvement of utility.
Therefore
, the products deal increasing day by day.
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an other word publication
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the job centre
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is playing
to critical role
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in
business, so myriad persons will behold of a job and mostly like to apply the job.
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To
exemplify
this
point, we can consider with the help of newspaper
add
a public promotion of some product or service
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I
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got
the job opportunity.
Thus
, it is very useful.
Furthermore
, one more convincing point that cannot be ignored is it helps the consumer to consume time due to there is hectic schedule.
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The buyer
Buyer
is not required to spend time in getting the product.
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addition to that, another cause to be considered and cannot be overlooked is the shoppers are attracted by the kind of products.
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If
the consumer is convincing the condition is same, they can easy investment. In conclusion, I repopulate that there are innumerable strong arguments supporting it is
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a universal part
of in our life.
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broadcast judgement can be better utilized and increase the sale product.
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