In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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and more people are struggling around the world to make

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in order to support their families. In some nations people could make a lot of

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which may cause positive prospects

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companies, individuals and countries, whereas some people think that government should reduce high salaries.

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the arguments

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of all increasing salaries may cause good lifestyle to citizen and strengthen the economy of the country.

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people earn high salaries

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definitely they will spend more

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to buy some expensive products

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not only he improve his living standard

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companies business will grow

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economy become stronger.

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countries employment rate will increase and

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may cause some negative consequences

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as income growing of income disparities, where some people will earn more

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it is very harmful for a country to stable their economy and

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the average assets of American top 10 richest men are 90% higher than average income of all citizens of the country,

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happier on the other hands countries who paid less always found stressful, from my perspective the benefits of high salaries outweigh disadvantages are justified.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So, some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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