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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Nowadays more
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Nowadays, more
 and more people are struggling around the world to make
money
 in order to support their families. In some nations people could make a lot of
money
 which may cause positive prospects
to
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for
 companies, individuals and countries, whereas some people think that government should reduce high salaries.
This
 essay will examine both sides of
arguments
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the arguments
.
To begin
 with,
first
 of all increasing salaries may cause good lifestyle to citizen and strengthen the economy of the country.
For
instance if
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instance, if
 people earn high salaries
then
 definitely they will spend more
money
 to buy some expensive products
as a result
 not only he improve his living standard
also
 companies business will grow
as a result
 economy become stronger.
In addition
 countries employment rate will increase and
consequently
crime rate
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the crime rate
will be reduce
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will be reduced
.
Secondly
, in
case
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the case
 of keeping
wage
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wages
 in limit from federal side
this
 may cause some negative consequences
such
 as income growing of income disparities, where some people will earn more
money
 and some will less as
result
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a result
 it is very harmful for a country to stable their economy and
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the need of every citizen.
For example
 the average assets of American top 10 richest men are 90% higher than average income of all citizens of the country,
hence
unemployment rate
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the unemployment rate
 increasing significantly which may
resultant
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result
 to crime at the end. In conclusion, countries who pay higher to their employer often
seen
give a certain impression or have a certain outward aspect
seem
 happier on the other hands countries who paid less always found stressful, from my perspective the benefits of high salaries outweigh disadvantages are justified.
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