It is thought by some that its better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some believe that
city
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the city
offers better life while others consider that the
countryside
is the best place to live in.
Although
city
provides more employment opportunities for people,
however
, I believe that better air quality makes the
countryside
, the best place to live in. On the one hand, it is considered that
city
comprises of more companies compared to
countryside
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the countryside
.
That is
to say, as the demand for human workforce is
high
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higher
in cities, there are more opportunities for people in various job positions which makes their chances for getting a job offer comparatively high.
For example
, in Chennai, there are nearly 3000 IT companies and still many companies are looking to recruit people.
However
, I believe that despite the fact of enormous
jobs
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job
offers in
city
, people prefer to stay in
countryside
as good health should be paramount.
On the other hand
, there are less pollutants released
in
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into
the
countryside
.
This
is because there are less vehicles on
road
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the road
,
Accept space
,
which means that the release of harmful gases like carbon di-oxide is exceptionally low compared to
city
side, thereby improving the quality of air.
For instance
,
recent survey
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a recent survey
recent surveys
conducted by Indian Environmental Control Board showed that many places in
countryside
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the countryside
has ranked
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have ranked
better for human survival compared to metropolitan cities as the percentage of fumes in less. I am of the view that better environment contributes to better health thereby improving their
life span
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifespan
. To conclude, though
city
side is known
for
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from
the job offers it provides,
however I
Accept comma addition
however, I
completely agree that
countryside
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the countryside
is
best place
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a better place
better place
because of the less air pollution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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