It is thought by some that its better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some believe that

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city

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the city

offers better life while others consider that the

countryside

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is the best place to live in.

Although

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city

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provides more employment opportunities for people,

however

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, I believe that better air quality makes the

countryside

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, the best place to live in. On the one hand, it is considered that

city

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comprises of more companies compared to

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countryside

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the countryside

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to say, as the demand for human workforce is

high

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higher

in cities, there are more opportunities for people in various job positions which makes their chances for getting a job offer comparatively high.

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, in Chennai, there are nearly 3000 IT companies and still many companies are looking to recruit people.

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, I believe that despite the fact of enormous

jobs

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job

offers in

city

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, people prefer to stay in

countryside

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as good health should be paramount.

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, there are less pollutants released

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into

the

countryside

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is because there are less vehicles on

road

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the road

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which means that the release of harmful gases like carbon di-oxide is exceptionally low compared to

city

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side, thereby improving the quality of air.

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recent survey

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a recent survey

recent surveys

conducted by Indian Environmental Control Board showed that many places in

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countryside

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the countryside

has ranked

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have ranked

better for human survival compared to metropolitan cities as the percentage of fumes in less. I am of the view that better environment contributes to better health thereby improving their

life span

the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)

lifespan

. To conclude, though

city

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side is known

for

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from

the job offers it provides,

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however I

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however, I

completely agree that

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countryside

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the countryside

best place

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a better place

better place

because of the less air pollution.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

263 words

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metropolitan
infrastructure
cosmopolitan
commute
sociocultural
prosperity
sustainability
rural
tranquility
urbanization
relocation
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populace
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It is thought by some that its better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

These days too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent to you agree with this statement.

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?