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when designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

#factor #appearance
In the
worls
everything that exists anywhere
world
worlds
 where
appearance
 matters the most, it becomes difficult to
design
 a building based on its
usage
. While designing, it is important to consider the use of building rather than its exterior.
This
 essay will argue why it is important to
design
 according to its
function
. On one hand, all famous
building
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buildings
 are known for its
appearance
 rather than its
function
. Architects and planners are pushed to an extent to
design
 for the outlook and in doing so the
function
 is compromised. These building sets as an example and changes the mindset of
client
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the client
 that the
appearance
 is more essential than the
usage
.
For instance
, Famous architect Zaha Hadid focuses on designing the form of the building
first
 and
then
 tries to fit in the
function
 later according to the shape.
This
 situation results in compromise the building's
function
 to a certain extend. Her works are known for its
appearance
 which eventually creates a view that the exterior is considered highly needed.
On the other hand
, all logical thinkers agree that it is mandatory to focus on the planning of the building than its outward
appearance
. There is
famous ideology
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a famous ideology
 of one of the famous architect - ' form follows
function
' which means, a building should built based on its
function
. During ancient era, people built structures for survival, as technology started they started to adapt to the changes by adding elements to their structures.
For example
, Building a wooden structure
on
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in
a
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an
 earthquake prone area is utterly useless because it
doesnt
does not
doesn't
serves
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serve
 the purpose. Here the
apperance
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
 of building will certainly cause
problem
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a problem
problems
 to the entire structure.
This
 clearly explains why it is important to
design
 according to the
usage
 rather looking after the
appearance
.
This
 essay argued that why it is necessary to plan a building according to its
usage
. In my opinion its extremely important to
design
 a structure based on its
fucntion
(mathematics) a mathematical relation such that each element of a given set (the domain of the function) is associated with an element of another set (the range of the function)
function
 rather than its
appearance
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • user experience
  • ergonomic
  • productivity
  • safety standards
  • building codes
  • emergency exits
  • ventilation
  • accessibility features
  • sustainability
  • energy-efficient
  • flexibility
  • adaptability
  • multifunctional
  • regulations
  • operational costs
  • environmental impact
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