Some people say that artists such as painters, writers and musicians affect our life more than scientists. TO what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether art or science has greater
impact
on our lives.
This
essay will discuss both sides using examples from the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments. There is ample evidence that the arts have paved the way for
ground breaking
being or producing something like nothing done or experienced or created before
groundbreaking
discoveries, merely by
conceptulising
have the idea for
conceptualizing
them long before the real world scientists figure out how to build them. The central reason behind
this
is twofold,
firstly
the only limitation constraint in the field of painting or music is usually
ones
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one's
imagination.
Secondly
, in disciplines
such
as art the idea just has to be visualised and perhaps explained,
this
considerably easier than actually creating or building the idea,
nevermind
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never mind
a prototype.
For example
, recent
emperical
derived from experiment and observation rather than theory
empirical
research by the UK government demonstrated that almost all inventions of the
last
100 years were
first
found in books and artistic reproductions, long before been constructed by scientists or technologists. It must not be forgotten that
although
the inventions were not actually made by their creators, they most
definetely
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
inspired or provided a possible direction for the more industrially minded.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
is conclusively clear that
although
the
impact
of artistic creation is not felt immediately by society, they undoubtedly act
as possible guide
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as a possible guide
.
Although
their
in or at that place
there
is a case for dancers,
sculpturists
, painters, artists and composers enriching
socety
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
, the
impact
of chemists,
bioligists
(biology) a scientist who studies living organisms
biologists
,
Accept space
,
physicists cannot be overstated.
This
largely because before any device or discovery has any influence on
society it
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society, it
has to be made, tested, proven and even
then
marketed.
For example
, an extensive study by Oxford University showed that over 6% ideas dreamt up by artists and the
like
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likes
are actually made in real life. Consistent with
this
line of thinking is that a considerable amount of important products or discoveries were in fact accidental, microwave technology,
penecelin
any of various antibiotics obtained from Penicillium molds (or produced synthetically) and used in the treatment of various infections and diseases
penicillin
and even viagra.
Thus it
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Thus, it
is possible beyond doubt that the work of scientists has a
tremendeous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
tremendous
impact
on modern day life. From the
arguements
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
arguments
and examples given I firmly
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that
although
the creative fields provide an
in valuable
having incalculable monetary, intellectual, or spiritual worth
invaluable
contribution to our lives, the role of science is much more practical, it is felt on a daily basis, and
therefore
its
impact
is considerably greater. It is predicted that the role of science and technology will increasingly grow in importance.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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