Some people say that artists such as painters, writers and musicians affect our life more than scientists. TO what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

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Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether art or science has greater

impact

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on our lives.

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essay will discuss both sides using examples from the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments. There is ample evidence that the arts have paved the way for

ground breaking

being or producing something like nothing done or experienced or created before

groundbreaking

discoveries, merely by

conceptulising

have the idea for

conceptualizing

them long before the real world scientists figure out how to build them. The central reason behind

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is twofold,

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the only limitation constraint in the field of painting or music is usually

ones

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one's

imagination.

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, in disciplines

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as art the idea just has to be visualised and perhaps explained,

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considerably easier than actually creating or building the idea,

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never mind

a prototype.

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, recent

emperical

derived from experiment and observation rather than theory

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research by the UK government demonstrated that almost all inventions of the

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100 years were

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found in books and artistic reproductions, long before been constructed by scientists or technologists. It must not be forgotten that

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the inventions were not actually made by their creators, they most

definetely

without question and beyond doubt

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inspired or provided a possible direction for the more industrially minded.

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Therefore it

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Therefore, it

is conclusively clear that

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the

impact

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of artistic creation is not felt immediately by society, they undoubtedly act

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as a possible guide

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their

in or at that place

there

is a case for dancers,

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, painters, artists and composers enriching

socety

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

, the

impact

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of chemists,

bioligists

(biology) a scientist who studies living organisms

biologists

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physicists cannot be overstated.

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largely because before any device or discovery has any influence on

society it

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society, it

has to be made, tested, proven and even

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marketed.

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, an extensive study by Oxford University showed that over 6% ideas dreamt up by artists and the

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likes

are actually made in real life. Consistent with

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line of thinking is that a considerable amount of important products or discoveries were in fact accidental, microwave technology,

penecelin

any of various antibiotics obtained from Penicillium molds (or produced synthetically) and used in the treatment of various infections and diseases

penicillin

and even viagra.

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Thus it

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Thus, it

is possible beyond doubt that the work of scientists has a

tremendeous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

tremendous

impact

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on modern day life. From the

arguements

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

arguments

and examples given I firmly

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that

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the creative fields provide an

in valuable

having incalculable monetary, intellectual, or spiritual worth

invaluable

contribution to our lives, the role of science is much more practical, it is felt on a daily basis, and

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its

impact

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is considerably greater. It is predicted that the role of science and technology will increasingly grow in importance.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

389 words

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Some people say that artists such as painters, writers and musicians affect our life more than scientists. TO what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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