Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

In modern world wedding ceremonies became greater and more costly, and there are different reasons for it
such
as greater expectations, drive of
attain
Suggestion
attaining
a higher social status, and easiness of
achieveing
to gain with effort
achieving
required circumstances. In my opinion, lager marriages
is
Suggestion
are
an indicator of negative development considering cultural and financial results. On one hand, there are simple but strong reasons of expensive and bigger ceremonies.
Firstly
, it is true that today's people experience the technology and as a consequence they raise
greaterexpectations
Suggestion
greater expectations
.
For instance
, people use social media to follow the other's living, some of which have improved opportunities.
Hence
, individuals can observe large organizations like marriages and develop a set of criteria to meet for their own occasions.
Secondly
, most believe that a huge and costly wedding is a sign of higher social status,
bacouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
it is assumed that they are rich and classy.
Thirdly
, compared to
past
Suggestion
the past
, it is easier to achieve the requirements of
such
an occasion
such
as the special places, organization companies and even cake ateliers.
On the other hand
, I certainly
aggree
be in accord; be in agreement
agree
agreed
that big and expensive marriages are evidence of negative development.
Such
kind of occasions leads to cultural erosion by causing the eruption of variations in society.
Also
, it has financial effects on the couples apply for loans to the banks only for the wedding ceremony expenses.
This
is a waste of money and causes disagreements between couples. In conclusion, expectations, status and accessibility are the reasons for bigger and costly marriages, and it can be seen as a negative development since it results in cultural erosion and financial issues.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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