Some people believe that people have the right to University education and government should make it free no matter what they are financial backgrounds extent do you agree or disagree ?

A group of masses
argue
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argues
that University
education
should be made compulsory for completely free for all individual irrespective of financial well being
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Will fully sponsored higher
education
brings all good? I
opened
express one's opinion openly and without fear or hesitation
opined
that
this
will bring
more bad to
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more bad
government than good my opinion is justified in following paragraphs
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To begin
with it
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with, it
is impractical to expect that government funds higher
education
for all aspirants of society. Because
this
will put more financial burden on
Nation
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the nation
the Nation
.
This
burden is generated by expenditure incurred in remunerations and support
educational requirements
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the educational requirements
of all. It will be difficult for any nation to facilitate free higher
education
from its own funds and does quality of
education
will suffer
at
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in
long run
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the long run
.
Moreover
, if the tertiary
education
is made completely free
then
level of competition among
masses
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the masses
will decrease completing four in higher University will lack motivation.
Hence
level of
education
will degrade.
Instead
of free access to universities for all, it will be better to sponsor the
education
of meritorious students only, is given to weaker sections of the society
also
.
In addition
to
this
, in spite of University
education government
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education, government
should pay more attention on vocational training. Because vocational training gives
opportunity
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the opportunity
opportunities
an opportunity
to develop
learners
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learner
talents.
For example
, in USA vocational training is given free of cost to
natives
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the natives
which help students in finding easy employment and paying their tuition fee for higher
education
. In conclusion all Du University
education
is vital it should not be free for all deserving
student
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students
should avail free
education
.
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