Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Paparazzi
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The paparazzi
has become a brand in itself in the recent few years by following celebrities and clicking their pictures.
Although
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the
privacy
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of the celebrities is hampered by the same
,
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,
but sometimes being famous is
also
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not easy.I
beleive
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believe
that these images must not be taken and every person must have the
right
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to protect his or her
privacy
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.
This
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essay will discuss about both the aspects of the topic and will be a bit more inclined towards the safeguarding of
individual's
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an individual's privacy
the individual's privacy
privacy
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. The public in general
follow
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follows
celebrities and famous individuals and
ofcourse remain
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of course, remain
of course remain
interested in their lives
,
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,
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however it
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however, it
is important to understand that apart from being superstars they are
also
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normal people with a basic life and
familiy
a social unit living together
family
and it creates immense pressure on them and their families to always be in the supervision of so many cameras.Nobody can be perfect all the time and sometimes when they get clicked with not so good images
,
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,
they are trolled insensitively.
For example
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,
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,
I visited
corbett national park
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the Corbett national park
Corbett national park
an
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a
year ago and a famous singer named
sonu
the capital and largest city of Yemen; on the central plateau
Sanaa
nigam
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Nigam
was there too on a vacation and he had to hide himself with goggles and
mask
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masks
a mask
the mask
to avoid being seen by many people.
Privacy
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is the
right
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of every
indidual whether
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individual, whether
individual whether
a celebrity or a simple bank clerk.
Athough
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Although
Though
privacy
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is
important but
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important, but
we see that
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
famous people have
also
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adapted themselves with
such
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paparazzi type behaviour and they gain popularity through the same.Sometimes
,
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,
it becomes a win win situation for both.The celebrities
also
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have started liking being clicked and followed and enjoy the fame and dress themselves for the same.
For instance
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,
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,
airport looks have become so common
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
because of the same reason.Karan
johar
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Johar
,
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,
the famous
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
director once said in an interview that he
doesnt
does not
doesn't
like when he goes to the airport and does not find paparazzi there as he has prepared and dressed himself for the occasion. In conclusion clicking pictures and invading anyone's
privacy
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without the consent cannot be considered
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right but
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right, but
if the celebrity does not have a problem with it
,
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,
then
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it is absolutely fine.Striking a balance between
right
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and wrong is the key to almost all the problems in the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invasion of privacy
  • personal space
  • media scrutiny
  • mental health
  • public figures
  • relentless pursuit
  • legal implications
  • ethical considerations
  • tabloid journalism
  • financial gain
  • public interest
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