Some people think watching sports is wastage of time during leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?

A few individuals opine that watching sports does not add any value, but
instead
is a complete waste of ample
time
. I partially agree with
this
idea as watching sports can come out to be both beneficial or disadvantageous for anyone depending on the amount of
time
spent on watching. I support
this
notion because there is a saying "Excess of everything is bad". So, if
one
spends all of their free
time
watching sports on television, that might have a bad effect on their eyesight.
In addition
to
this
,
this
makes a person more lethargic too, if they always tend to only watch rather than playing. Which
as a result
, can deteriorate their health as well.
On the other hand
, I feel watching sports is good because
one
might get inspired and can start indulging in that particular game. Which would be a win-win situation as along with gaining knowledge of rules and regulations of the game,
one
is implementing the same in their real life too. Which is a healthier option and the person will feel more active. Apart from
this
if
one
is not always choosing to
watch but
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watch, but
spend their leisure
time
doing other
activities
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activities, then
then
that will add more value to their personality. To summarize, watch sports in leisure
time
is
Suggestion
are
a waste of
time
or not, that depends on
individuals
Suggestion
individual
individuals'
individual's
time
which they are spending. If they always prefer to give more
time
to it
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
it's waste
otherwise
it might result in fruitful
time
as it's good for their cognizance as well as well-being.
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