Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Trees play a vital role in having life on the planet blue. Many individuals
beileve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
that rather than on real estate building structure in
urban area
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urban areas
an urban area
, it is better to do more plantation drives there. I fully support the notion. It is irrefutable to say that with
growing population
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the growing population
on
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of
the earth, the need of having more land for housing
have
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has also surged
also
surged. The has been resulted
into
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in
cutting
down of the jungle
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down the jungle
down in the jungle
down in in the jungle
area of trees to match with demand of the citizen. So, in return the global warming has been increased and
also
health issue of common man has seen
rise
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a rise
rising
from
last few decades
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the last few decades
.
Thus
, to have
better quality
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a better quality
of air index we should all focus on having more trees. Generally, the trees or forests are natural of home for other species.
Hence
, to build a home by destroying others home is not a sane thing to do. To add on, the
dooms day
(New Testament) day at the end of time following Armageddon when God will decree the fates of all individual humans according to the good and evil of their earthly lives
doomsday
has arrived when the
governements
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government
of all nations ought to get unite and take some strong and quick actions toward saving the environment else there will natural disasters coming on the way. The green area and parks should be built and
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
significaces
the quality of being significant
significance
should
be promoted to not
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not be promoted to
get
destryoed
spoiled or ruined or demolished
destroyed
by the local people. To
recapitulize
, the building houses can solve the problem of people moving towards cities or towns.
However
, in the long run the effect will be quite catastrophic. The trees are
free source
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free sources
of
gases mainly
Accept comma addition
gases, mainly
oxygen that requires life to survive.
Moreover
, these are the only
spaecs
optical instrument consisting of a frame that holds a pair of lenses for correcting defective vision
specs
spaces
space
for many birds.

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