Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays most
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Nowadays, most
of the companies promote their products through advertisement to achieve target. From my
perspective
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perspective, this
this
is the best way to enhance
number
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the number
a number
of customers to improve revenue
with
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by
focusing on
quality
and hiring hardworking staff.
To begin
with,
first
of all marketing is the only key through which we can share the detail description of the products to the audience
as a
result we
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result, we
can generate more selling which is not only beneficial for the
company
and
also
to strengthen the economy of the country.
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is the online shopping platform in Pakistan from 2009 to 2011 they sold only 50 products without promotion while in 2012 to 2013 they approached to different media firms
consequently
achieved significant outcomes while selling 40
thousands
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thousand
products within just 2 years.
Secondly
, from my way of thinking apart from
marketing there
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marketing, there
are some other factors to be
follow
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followed
to make
business
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a business
the business
successful
such
as maintain
products
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product
products'
quality
, satisfying customers while recruiting talented staff.
For example
cheez
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mall is one of the online selling products
company
despite spending huge currencies on digital marketing still their
business
fall down just because of poor
products
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product
products'
quality
and appointing unprofessional staff.
In
addition strong
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addition, strong
relationship is
also
important with
customer
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customers
a customer
can lead a
business
toward success. In conclusion, even though we can make our
business
success by marketing and
promotion
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promotion, however
however
there are some other factors
such
as
quality
, customer satisfaction and having
positive relationship
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positive relationships
a positive relationship
and hiring professional which can be added to improve
company
reputation which is beneficial for individual,
company
and country.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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