Government should support sports and the arts at school to encourage children to take part in sports, more than supporting professional sports and artistic performances for general public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sport personality and entertainer have

gain

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gained

popularity across the world over the decade. Recently, people said that the government need to play their part to help students to

participate sport and

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participate in sport and

art activities as much as they did to professional entertainer and sports star. I completely agree with that notion. Learning

art

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the art

and sport at a young age stimulates their mind into creative thinking. In the era where people spend

majority

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the majority

a majority

of their time on smart gadgets, children are less exposed to physical games and art craft causing them to become dull and

lethargy

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lethargic

.

Therefore

, the higher authority should place more effort in invigorating them on the importance of these types of ventures. In turn, more and more pupil will join and perform making them more versatile and unique in their own way.

Furthermore

, the government should collaborate with the school administrators to create a platform where students able to showcase their talent.

For example

, national sport competition and young artist competition are held for those who are interested in showcasing their talent. With more stages like

this

, talented child will receive the support and the recognition, inspired them to become famous artist or athletes in

future

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the future

. These youth deserved to obtain incentive from the government to

further

develop their skills. To sum up,

although

rooting

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rooted

for professional people is

beneficial but

Accept comma addition

beneficial, but

I think that students need the encouragement as equal as all famous

artist

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artists

and athletes out there since the latter begins from

young age

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a young age

. Who knows,

this

children

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child

will make the nation proud someday.