Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Young generation
use
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uses
both legal and illegal drugs more than other people in all modern societies which due to a bad example
from
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of
their parents and adult people. There are some obvious factor that could lead to
this
issue, and by acknowledging these
causes
an occurrence of something
cases
, people could take some actions to solve
this
. Educators
has become
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have become
a major cause in the case that drugs
is
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are
very popular
in
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with
youngsters. If teachers or
tutor
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tutors
a tutor
at school do not warn about disadvantages of drugs, their student could try any one which they think it may be good to relieve stress and happier.
Moreover
, thanks to technology, they are easier to access to one.
For instance
, in order to sell illegal drugs
such
as opium and marijuana, they can establish
website
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a website
without any problems or actions
from
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of
some governments.
Thus
, a person can surf
this
website and buy drugs for him.
Nonetheless
, owing to adopt a solution which school should give more lessons about bad consequences, youths would be more aware and remain themselves and their friends do not buy drugs anymore except they have
illness
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an illness
the illness
.
Furthermore
,
government
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the government
also
should take an action that must to find and block any e-commerce websites about abused drugs. Indeed, according to a newspaper, the government arrested the owner or founder of the biggest website where people can easily buy and sell any form of abused drugs.
Therefore
, people cannot find one
in
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on
the Internet.
This
can lead to a reduction the amount of drugs that young people can buy and use them. In conclusion, lacking knowledge about the bad effect of drugs by teachers and the fact that illegal drugs have been sold so
easy
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easily
in
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on
the Internet are two main causes why drugs are used widespread by young people in these days. In response to these causes, several solutions could be considered to be taken alleviate the existing problem,
such
as more lessons from school and actions from the government with abused drug websites to cut down on illegal sales for drugs.
Submitted by Thanh on

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