Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Young generation
use
both legal and illegal drugs more than other people in all modern societies which due to a bad example Suggestion
uses
from
their parents and adult people. There are some obvious factor that could lead to Suggestion
of
this
issue, and by acknowledging these causes
, people could take some actions to solve an occurrence of something
cases
this
.
Educators has become
a major cause in the case that drugs Suggestion
have become
is
very popular Suggestion
are
in
youngsters. If teachers or Suggestion
with
tutor
at school do not warn about disadvantages of drugs, their student could try any one which they think it may be good to relieve stress and happier. Suggestion
tutors
a tutor
Moreover
, thanks to technology, they are easier to access to one. For instance
, in order to sell illegal drugs such
as opium and marijuana, they can establish website
without any problems or actions Suggestion
a website
from
some governments. Suggestion
of
Thus
, a person can surf this
website and buy drugs for him.
Nonetheless
, owing to adopt a solution which school should give more lessons about bad consequences, youths would be more aware and remain themselves and their friends do not buy drugs anymore except they have illness
. Suggestion
an illness
the illness
Furthermore
, government
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the government
also
should take an action that must to find and block any e-commerce websites about abused drugs. Indeed, according to a newspaper, the government arrested the owner or founder of the biggest website where people can easily buy and sell any form of abused drugs. Therefore
, people cannot find one in
the Internet. Suggestion
on
This
can lead to a reduction the amount of drugs that young people can buy and use them.
In conclusion, lacking knowledge about the bad effect of drugs by teachers and the fact that illegal drugs have been sold so easy
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easily
in
the Internet are two main causes why drugs are used widespread by young people in these days. In response to these causes, several solutions could be considered to be taken alleviate the existing problem, Suggestion
on
such
as more lessons from school and actions from the government with abused drug websites to cut down on illegal sales for drugs.
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