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It is believed by some that people should take a yearly driving test in order to ensure safety on the roads, while others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is considered by many that evaluation of one's driving skills should be done by taking
driving
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a driving test
the driving test
test
 yearly.
which
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Which
 in result will ensure safety on roads.
However
, others think that it is not required. In my opinion, Driving
test
 evaluation is not required as it is already done when a person got the license.
Firstly
, if these tests
started
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started, then
then
 It will make the situation worse. As we know that in present scenario,
for getting
dismiss from the mind; stop remembering
forgetting
 their license, people have to stand in long queues and wait for many days.If
this
 evaluation starts
then
 people might have to face
further
 problems for getting these evaluations done.
Secondly
, Driving is a skill, If one learned it
once
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once, then
then
 its with them for
lifetime
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a lifetime
. So, they need not to take
test
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the test
a test
 again to show that they know how to drive.
In addition
 to that,
instead
 of taking these driving tests again to ensure
safetly
the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions
safety
safely
, people should be taught basic rules and regulations to drive on highways. If they are aware of
simple guidelines
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the simple guidelines
 like when to overtake and when not and educating them about sign boards might lower the risk of accidents.Hoardings should be there to keep
them reminding
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them, reminding
 of their family at home waiting for them.
This
 may change the drivers mind towards more careful driving. To recapitulate, individuals should be taught about traffic sign boards and guideline to drive safely on
road
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the road
instead
 of taking
driving
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the driving test
test
 again and again.Apart from
this
, emotional
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