It is believed by some that people should take a yearly driving test in order to ensure safety on the roads, while others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is considered by many that evaluation of one's driving skills should be done by taking

driving

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a driving test

the driving test

test

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yearly.

which

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Which

in result will ensure safety on roads.

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, others think that it is not required. In my opinion, Driving

test

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evaluation is not required as it is already done when a person got the license.

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, if these tests

started

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started, then

then

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It will make the situation worse. As we know that in present scenario,

for getting

dismiss from the mind; stop remembering

forgetting

their license, people have to stand in long queues and wait for many days.If

this

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evaluation starts

then

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people might have to face

further

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problems for getting these evaluations done.

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, Driving is a skill, If one learned it

once

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once, then

then

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its with them for

lifetime

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a lifetime

. So, they need not to take

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test

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the test

a test

again to show that they know how to drive.

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to that,

instead

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of taking these driving tests again to ensure

safetly

the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions

safety

safely

, people should be taught basic rules and regulations to drive on highways. If they are aware of

simple guidelines

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the simple guidelines

like when to overtake and when not and educating them about sign boards might lower the risk of accidents.Hoardings should be there to keep

them reminding

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them, reminding

of their family at home waiting for them.

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may change the drivers mind towards more careful driving. To recapitulate, individuals should be taught about traffic sign boards and guideline to drive safely on

road

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the road

instead

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of taking

driving

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the driving test

test

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again and again.Apart from

this

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, emotional

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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

242 words

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