Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,

money

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is one of the most significant materials in our lives.

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For

many people, it is appropriate to marry for

money

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rather than

love

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However

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, I believe that

both

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love

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and

money

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should be

bouncetogether

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bounced together

bounce together

in any marriages. Certainly,

money

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is an important part in our lives [TS]. It is hard for any persons to accept a partner which* does not have

money

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or at least a job to take care of future family.

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, said “marry for

money

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”

also

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has

its

the thing named or in question

right in some extent.

However

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love

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should be the root of any marriages [TS].

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, it is because

love

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such

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a glue to connect two persons which have their own lives, become one (NC). So, they can share each other’s the sadness, happiness to overcome any difficulties in daily lives.

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love

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makes people growing up because they do not only have

responsibility

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a responsibility

to themselves, but

also

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to their partners as well.

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why marrying with

love

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is always encouraged. In my opinion, I think that

both

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love

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and

money

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are

both

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necessary [TS]. Marriage relying on

money

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would be rapidly disintegrated when unfortunately the

money

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run

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running

out. In contrary*, marriage relying on

love

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would sometimes come to end when they could not earn

money

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to carry out family (NC),

such

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as paying bills, buying food, etc.

Therefore

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love

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and

money

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should stand together in marriage even though their contribution could be unbalanced (NC). As we have seen, marriage without either

money

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love

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would come to an unhappy

ending

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end

. So I believe that they

both

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have their own contribution to a merry family.

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3
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

270 words

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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and preparatory methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fresh water has become a global problem for the world. What are the causes of it? What measures government and individual should take to resolve the problem ? Give reasons and examples for your answer.