Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,
money
is one of the most significant materials in our lives.
To
Suggestion
For
many people, it is appropriate to marry for
money
rather than
love
.
However
, I believe that both
love
and
money
should be combined in any
marriage
. Certainly,
money
plays an important part in our lives. It is hard for any persons to accept a partner who does not have
money
or at least a job to take care of their future family.
Hence
, it is said, “marry for
money
” is right in some extent.
However
,
love
should be the root of any
marriage
.
Firstly
, it is because
love
is
such
a strong bond between two persons who have their own lives, and become one. So, they can share each other’s sadness, happiness to overcome any difficulties in their daily lives.
Moreover
,
love
makes people grow up because they do not only have
responsibility
Suggestion
a responsibility
to themselves, but
also
to their partners as well.
That is
why marrying for
love
is always encouraged. In my opinion, I think that
love
and
money
are both necessary. A
marriage
relying on
money
would rapidly disintegrate when unfortunately the
money
ran out. In contrary, a
marriage
relying on
love
would sometimes come to end when they could not earn
money
to carry out family duties
such
as paying bills, buying food, etc.
Therefore
,
love
and
money
should stand together in
marriage
even though their contribution could be unbalanced. As we have seen,
marriage
without either
money
or
love
would come to an unhappy end. So I believe that they both make their own contribution to a merry family.
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