People in the limelight have a responsibility to set a example to others by their good behavior. Do you agree?

Many argue that popular figures in society should maintain a certain level of decency, because they are very influential.
Although
there is some truth to
this
notion, I agree to some extent. One argument in support of
this
claim is that, famous people often have a large
followng
about to be mentioned or specified
following
.
In other words
, they have the ability to influence their fans with their life choices.
This
is because, when people admire each other they are inclined to
mimickery
the act of mimicking; imitative behavior
mimicry
.
This
can be exemplified by, the indecent acts committed by Miley Cyrus in 2014.
Although
her followers were mainly decent young girls, 80% of them were influenced by her bad
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and copied her attitude.
Therefore
, it is apparent that crowds replicate those
thye
idollize
love unquestioningly and uncritically or to excess; venerate as an idol
idolize
, regardless of their actions. In turn, celebrities should take extra care in ensuring they are on their best
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Despite the burden of being influential that well known individuals carry with them, they are
also
entitled to their own decisions.
This
is because, everyone is allowed freedom of speech and has the right to act how they please.
Furthermore
, not everyone is as easily influenced by their idols.
In addition
to
this
, people can learn to love their positive qualities, but
also
acknowledge their negative traits.
For instance
, everyone loves Michael Jackson, a famous performer, for his music and kind personality,
however
, no one has ever been influenced by his acts of child molestation committed in 1996. In conclusion, while there are many reasons why celebrities should be well behaved to set a good example for their fans, people are responsible for their own lives and are entitled to act how they want.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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