Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent days, it's been argued that, only governments and large companies can do something to improve the
environment
and individuals cannot make any much difference.
This
essay disagrees with the
statement eventhough
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statement, even though
statement even though
the contribution from the individual for improving the
environment
is less and it takes several number of years to improve, if we work as an individual. The
government
and large companies can improve the
environment
in quick span of time.
Government
has all the powers in
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
hand to enforce the rule on
public
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the public
and all the companies for not using the products which affects the
environment
. And, large companies can come forward to restrict the usage of the products which pollutes the
environment
and dispose their wastages in a proper place and recycle it rather than letting it out on the river, as
this
will not affect the
environment
.
This
doesn't mean that
environment
can be saved or improved only by the
government
and large companies. Even when the
government
and large companies failed to do the things said above, Individuals can come
upfront
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up front
and join their hands together to clean up the river, avoid usages of plastics etc.
This
will improve the
environment
to some extent. Plastic bags
plays
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play
a major role in affecting the stability of an
environment
. To get over the issue, as a starting step, One of the
guy
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guys
from
chennai
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Chennai
, who is an owner of a
super market
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
, banned the usage of plastic covers in his store. He had kept a notice in front of his shop stating that, No plastic bags will be provided and customers needs to bring their own cotton bags to carry the items with them.
Also he
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Also, he
came up one step forward and gave discounts for the customers who brings up cotton bags to carry the purchased item from his shop. In conclusion, each and every individual can bring up more difference to the
environment
and make it better by joining hands together. People no need to wait for the
government
or some companies to take some necessary action to improve the
environment
.
Submitted by ergbalachandar on

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