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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult , such as the sahara desert or the Antarctic.

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Nowadays, there are increasing number of visitors in areas with unfavourable
weather
Accept comma addition
weather, for
for example
, the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. I agree with
this
 statement and the reason is not far-fetched. One major explanation for
this
 is due to the fact that individuals, scientists and explorers have become more curious about the various effects of global warming across the globe.
Thus
, visiting
such
 places may provide insights into
further
 study that can help to combat
this
 challenge.
For example
, it becomes quite easy to find
archeologists
an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture
archaeologists
 going to
such
 places to understand the unique entities that live there,
likewise
 geologist often visit
such
 places for mining and exploration activities. For the curious individual who simply wants to take a break from the busy world, going to
such
 places will help to appreciate the differences and uniqueness of our worlds, while
also
 noting the similarities that exist across borders. I
also
 look forward to taking a vacation in the desert someday, because I believe it will help to boost my survival instincts.
However
, due to the extreme weather in
such
 areas, it poses a health risk to individuals who are not used to
such
 localities. They may be inadequately prepared or not properly equipped to live in
such
 areas because it is not something they are very used to.
In addition
, the cost of travelling to these regions
are
Suggestion
is
 very high and it implies that the local currency is being invested outside the economy. In conclusion, going to these locations will help to answer many
meterological
of or pertaining to atmospheric phenomena, especially weather and weather conditions
meteorological
 questions which mainly are the effects of the changing
athmospheric
relating to or located in the atmosphere
atmospheric
 situations on the different species of animals that exist and ultimately on mankind.
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