Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

children
Suggestion
Children
need to get educated about manners and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
from an early age. Some people believe that physical
punishment
is an effective way of teaching discipline.
However
,
this
essay will argue that punishing children physically does not help in developing good
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in them. On the one hand, Some people think that by corporal
punishment
one can develop a good sense of discipline in children. There are some reasons why they believe it. By punishing children physically, parents can instill fear in them.
This
fear can avoid children from
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
that mistake again.
For example
, a parent spanks a child when it runs towards a busy street.
This
makes the child remember not to repeat that mistake again. Parents choose
this
type of
punishment
to achieve fast results.
However
, they do not think of long term consequences.
On the other hand
, Punishing children physically will have a lot of long term effects both physically and mentally. There are many instances where children end up physically abused in the name of discipline. Inflicting pain can cause depression and other mental illnesses in children.
For example
, A research study from
Arlington university
Accept comma addition
Arlington, university
shows that 45% of mental illness in children
is
Suggestion
are
the direct result of excessive physical
punishment
.
Therefore
, any sort of
punishment
like smacking, spanking or slapping can cause serious issues in children. In conclusion, even though many people think that punishing children will make them more disciplined,
this
essay argued that it will not be the best solution as it will have a detrimental effect on children. In my opinion, rather than corporal
punishment
, it is good to explain children the effects of their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and create awareness in them.

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