Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is much debate regarding who should cater to a toddler while their mother and father are at work. A portion of people believe that direct family members should be responsible, whereas, others believe that nurseries offer the most adequate

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essay will discuss both these views, followed by a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, day

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employees are often well trained to execute their jobs efficiently.

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, since they are being paid, they are constantly attentive to

childrens needs

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the children's needs

children's needs

children needs

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, they may be insufficient in terms of an emotional connection and support.

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is because, the child is not accustomed to them, as well as, they are not very keen on forming deep bonds.

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, child

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centre's are open during certain times, often the same times as

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a typical

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, they are very accessible and reliable.

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, my father found great help in dropping my brother and

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objective form of "I"

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at a nursery while he was busy, they took great

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of us, but he had to cut his time short because they closed at 3 pm sharp, and his work ended at 4.

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, the trust that exists between a kid and his grandparent is unmatched.

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set up comes as a relief for the mother as she trusts that her kids are in safe,

familair

well known or easily recognized

familiar

hands.

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, a grandmother,

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, would be very well aware of the

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child's

children

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schedule and important things

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as, allergies. These are imperative points that a supervisor at a

daycare

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day care

centre might miss out on.

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, a

neglible

so small as to be meaningless; insignificant

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disadvantage is that, elderly people often forget about

small details

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the small details

and always fall asleep.

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, that might pose a direct threat on a

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well being. To illustrate, my grandfather always took

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of my sister and would always nap during her bathroom time, in turn, my parents would return to find that she wet herself. In conclusion,

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there is much debate surrounding

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topic

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I believe youngsters should be cater'd to

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obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction

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their bloodline.

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is a safer and more trustworthy set up.