Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is much debate regarding who should cater to a toddler while their mother and father are at work. A portion of people believe that direct family members should be responsible, whereas, others believe that nurseries offer the most adequate
care
.
This
essay will discuss both these views, followed by a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, day
care
employees are often well trained to execute their jobs efficiently.
In addition
to
this
, since they are being paid, they are constantly attentive to
childrens needs
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the children's needs
children's needs
children needs
.
However
, they may be insufficient in terms of an emotional connection and support.
This
is because, the child is not accustomed to them, as well as, they are not very keen on forming deep bonds.
Furthermore
, child
care
centre's are open during certain times, often the same times as
typical
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a typical
9-5 jobs,
therefore
, they are very accessible and reliable.
For example
, my father found great help in dropping my brother and
I
objective form of "I"
me
at a nursery while he was busy, they took great
care
of us, but he had to cut his time short because they closed at 3 pm sharp, and his work ended at 4.
On the other hand
, the trust that exists between a kid and his grandparent is unmatched.
This
set up comes as a relief for the mother as she trusts that her kids are in safe,
familair
well known or easily recognized
familiar
hands.
Moreover
, a grandmother,
for instance
, would be very well aware of the
childs
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child's
children
child
schedule and important things
such
as, allergies. These are imperative points that a supervisor at a
daycare
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day care
centre might miss out on.
On the contrary
, a
neglible
so small as to be meaningless; insignificant
negligible
disadvantage is that, elderly people often forget about
small details
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the small details
and always fall asleep.
Hence
, that might pose a direct threat on a
youngsters
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youngster
well being. To illustrate, my grandfather always took
care
of my sister and would always nap during her bathroom time, in turn, my parents would return to find that she wet herself. In conclusion,
although
there is much debate surrounding
this
topic
,
Accept space
,
I believe youngsters should be cater'd to
by
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buy
bye
their bloodline.
This
is a safer and more trustworthy set up.
Submitted by leen.a_likey on

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