The overuse of natural resources cause an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of this resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Recently, many people are overusing natural resources which is causing exhaustion of those resources. While some people
use
them in swim of new styles
such
as creating new furniture, others think that
such
actions bring harm to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. In my opinion, I agree with latter view and think that government should discourage the
use
of
such
resources.
First
of all, discouraging the
use
of natural reserves helps to preserve them because if they are used in very low amount, their numbers start to increase.
For example
, if the government bans the
use
of natural resources
such
as
wood
Accept comma addition
wood, then
then
the amount of trees in
jungle
Suggestion
the jungle
is less likely to decrease.
Also
, the environment around residential area might get better over-time.
This
is because
high number
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a high number
the high number
of trees leads to less carbon dioxide, which in turns reduces pollution and global warming.
Moreover
, birds and animals are
also
protected
with
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by
the protection of
earthy
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earth
resources.
In other words
,
many
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much
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
are often found
Suggestion
is often found
in forest where they depend on it and live their whole lives. To illustrate, birds need trees to create their
nest
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nests
while animals like deer lives
on
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in
woods
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the woods
and depend on nature for food.
Furthermore
, resources
such
as trees occasionally save
use
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
from natural disaster because their roots prevent landslide and soil-erosion by holding high amount of soil underneath them. To sum up, there are several advantages of natural resources like controlling pollution and preserving wildlife.
Hence
, government must stop the overuse of
this resources
Suggestion
these resources
this resource
in creating different unnecessary materials.
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