Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, we are living in the era of consumerism and

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plays a vital role in

the high

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higher

sales of consumer goods.

Now a days

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Nowadays

, those goods are

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sold which are not the real needs of the society and they are sold because of the power of advertising. To embark,

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is a reason for

high sales

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the high sales

of popular consumer goods in the society because it encourages people to buy the products and companies do everything

for

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their sales, for illustration, they hire famous people to advertise their products.

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, in the advertisements of

coldrinks

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cold rinks

, companies make the stories in which the famous actors and

actoresses

a female actor

actresses

actress

do acting for the popularity of goods,

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, cricketers are

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involved in

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, like, Virat Kohli is a fitness icon so he represents those products by which people stay healthy.

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through internet has

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reached its highest peak. These days internet has a power to advertise and make popular the goods.

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, if we watch

youtube

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YouTube

there are so many ads between the films, shows etc.

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are very intrusive sometimes so by

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, people get

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an incentive

the incentive

incentives

and stay

undenied

at a position directly lower than (with the subject just above)

underneath

to buy products because they seem very attractive in ads. We can

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see advertisements in our locality and streets on walls and boards, by

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, people are

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aware of the different products and deciding on the products, they should buy or not.

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, some people think, it is not a fault of

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and it totally depends on consumers to buy the products because people want to stay up to date.

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for

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For

example, a person has a good phone

instead

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this

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he buys a phone which is new in the market so it depends on

consumer's desire but

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the consumer's desire, but

the consumer's desire but

I disagree

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with

them because I think it is the

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which encourage people to buy new goods because if there are no ads so people are not aware about a new product and they do not buy a same thing which they already have. To sum up, there should be a limited number of advertisements and ads should be made on those goods which are the real needs of the society because ads

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for

those products which are not profitable to the consumers are worst and

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it is

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a waste of money.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

388 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumer behavior
perceived need
lifestyle aspirations
brand image
prestige
psychological techniques
scarcity
social proof
celebrity endorsements
technological advancements
product innovations
emerging consumer needs

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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advantages and disadvantages of listening to music? is it good habit to listening to music ?

Numerous animal species worldwide are currently facing extinction. Some argue that countries and individuals should prioritize protecting these animals, while others believe resources should be focused more on human issues. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many wild animals have become endangered. Why has this happened? What can governments do to stop this from continuing to happen?

Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example, the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?