Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, we are living in the era of consumerism and
advertisement
plays a vital role in
the high
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higher
sales of consumer goods.
Now a days
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Nowadays
, those goods are
also
sold which are not the real needs of the society and they are sold because of the power of advertising. To embark,
advertisement
is a reason for
high sales
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the high sales
of popular consumer goods in the society because it encourages people to buy the products and companies do everything
for
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in
their sales, for illustration, they hire famous people to advertise their products.
For example
, in the advertisements of
coldrinks
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cold rinks
, companies make the stories in which the famous actors and
actoresses
a female actor
actresses
actress
do acting for the popularity of goods,
Furthermore
, cricketers are
also
involved in
this
, like, Virat Kohli is a fitness icon so he represents those products by which people stay healthy.
Advertisement
through internet has
also
reached its highest peak. These days internet has a power to advertise and make popular the goods.
For example
, if we watch
youtube
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YouTube
there are so many ads between the films, shows etc.
which
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Which
are very intrusive sometimes so by
this
, people get
incentive
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an incentive
the incentive
incentives
and stay
undenied
at a position directly lower than (with the subject just above)
underneath
to buy products because they seem very attractive in ads. We can
also
see advertisements in our locality and streets on walls and boards, by
this
, people are
also
aware of the different products and deciding on the products, they should buy or not.
On the contrary
, some people think, it is not a fault of
advertisement
and it totally depends on consumers to buy the products because people want to stay up to date.
for
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For
example, a person has a good phone
instead
of
this
he buys a phone which is new in the market so it depends on
consumer's desire but
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the consumer's desire, but
the consumer's desire but
I disagree
to
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with
them because I think it is the
advertisement
which encourage people to buy new goods because if there are no ads so people are not aware about a new product and they do not buy a same thing which they already have. To sum up, there should be a limited number of advertisements and ads should be made on those goods which are the real needs of the society because ads
on
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for
those products which are not profitable to the consumers are worst and
its
it is
it's
also
a waste of money.
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