Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Where do you think people would love to go more enthusiastically, museums that have
a
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an
entry
fee
or the other where anybody can walk-in for free? In my opinion, people are more attracted and excited to go to a place when they are paying for it.
Although
, paid museums are out of reach for many people, but definitely it is worth paying some money when you get an organized space, easy dispersal and a voice guide.
Moreove
in addition
Moreover
, it
also
increases tourism.
Foremostly
, it is really disheartening that not many people are able to visit museums that
incurr
make oneself subject to; bring upon oneself; become liable to
incur
a
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an
entry
charge due to low income. Due to
this
, many children, who are the future of the society will be deprived of cultural, art and music knowledge
that is
offered best in the museums. Paid museums are definitely more popular amongst
toursits
someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
and natives as well.
Firstly
, visitors get a
mindboggling
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mind boggling
experience when they are exploring the museum with the headphones plugged-in which acts a voice guide for you.
Secondly
, paid museums tend to get less crowded, which offers enough space for people to explore their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
art, history piece or read about their beloved musicians.
In addition
to
this
, the most important benefit of
entry
fee
is that people only pay for what they are interested in. In a recent survey, in 2017, it was reported that 65% of people are
interested go
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interested, go
to
art museum
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an art museum
art museums
the art museum
, 25% people, like to read about history and only 15% visit museums that are related to music and musical instruments.
Furthermore
, it offers a
best
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better
good
way to
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
the trend and to improve
accordingly
. To conclude, increase in tourism, high quality experience at museums, exploring only the subject you are interested in, is definitely worth paying a small
fee
for admission to the museum.
Hence
, there are definitely more benefits of incurring
fee
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fees
in museums as compared to allowing free
entry
for everyone.

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