In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

Does
curfew
will prevent young people from becoming either perpetrators or victims of nighttime crime? In recent
times
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times, curfew
curfew
have been imposed is some states
from
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of
the US
,
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,
this
means that under no
circunstances
your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)
circumstances
circumstance
are teenagers allowed to be in streets after
certain
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a certain time
time
at night, there is no doubt in my mind that imposing
curfew
have its positive consequences but at the same
time
there are some negative points that need to be mentioned.
Firstly
,
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,
although
imposing
curfew
have
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has
their
possitive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
positives
consequences
such
as preventing teenagers from being robbed
,
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,
kidnapped or getting drugs and so forth in easy way there is no guarantee that all these risks could be avoided, it should
no
negation of a word or group of words
not
be forgotten that a large number of crimes are
commited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
during the day, young people can get drugs at school easily and kidnappers do not hesitate when they have an opportunity whatever hour.
For instance
, in past years there have sadly been some gun
shoots
the act of firing a projectile
shots
at schools and those attacks were during morning hours.Unfortunately,
those
plural of "this"
these
incidents
can not
can not
cannot
be prevented
with
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with a curfew
curfew
.
Secondly
, if in all cities
time
limit were
impossed
set forth authoritatively as obligatory
imposed
impressed
embossed
to
teenagers they
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teenagers, they
would
started
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start
to live with
fear regardless
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fear, regardless
if their city was secure or not.
For example
,
recent survey
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a recent survey
indicates that the a large number of
teenager
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teenagers
are feeling
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is feeling
more insecure than before due to the fact that they tend to
believed
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believe
that they are living like a movie story where no one can leave their houses after 10:00pm because there some
extrange
creatures looking for people to eat and they tend to believe that protection is needed
,
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,
a gun or something that can be useful for fight against those creatures.
Hence
,
this
is a huge disadvantage because teenagers are
tought
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
taught
ought
to be protected and
consequently
they believe that need
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believe that they need
a gun. To sum up, on balance I tend to believe that where
time limit
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a time limit
is
impossed
set forth authoritatively as obligatory
imposed
teenagers could no get drugs or could be robbed
easily but
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easily, but
in
someway
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some way
they start to live with more fear and
imaging
form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
things that inevitably are
watched
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watching
on TV or
videogames
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video games
thus
, more guns are demanded. But,
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