In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?
Does
curfew
will prevent young people from becoming either perpetrators or victims of nighttime crime? In recent Use synonyms
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times, curfew
curfew
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this
means that under no Linking Words
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are teenagers allowed to be in streets after your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)
circumstances
circumstance
certain
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a certain time
time
at night, there is no doubt in my mind that imposing Use synonyms
curfew
have its positive consequences but at the same Use synonyms
time
there are some negative points that need to be mentioned.
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Firstly
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,
although
imposing Linking Words
curfew
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have
their Suggestion
has
possitive
consequences characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
positives
such
as preventing teenagers from being robbedLinking Words
,
kidnapped or getting drugs and so forth in easy way there is no guarantee that all these risks could be avoided, it should Accept space
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no
be forgotten that a large number of crimes are negation of a word or group of words
not
commited
during the day, young people can get drugs at school easily and kidnappers do not hesitate when they have an opportunity whatever hour. bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
For instance
, in past years there have sadly been some gun Linking Words
shoots
at schools and those attacks were during morning hours.Unfortunately, the act of firing a projectile
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those
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these
can not
be prevented can not
cannot
with
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with a curfew
curfew
.
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Secondly
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time
limit were Use synonyms
impossed
to set forth authoritatively as obligatory
imposed
impressed
embossed
teenagers they
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teenagers, they
started
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start
fear regardless
if their city was secure or not. Suggestion
fear, regardless
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indicates that the a large number of Suggestion
a recent survey
teenager
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teenagers
are feeling
more insecure than before due to the fact that they tend to Suggestion
is feeling
believed
that they are living like a movie story where no one can leave their houses after 10:00pm because there some Suggestion
believe
extrange
creatures looking for people to eat and they tend to believe that protection is neededSuggestion
,
a gun or something that can be useful for fight against those creatures. Accept space
,
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this
is a huge disadvantage because teenagers are Linking Words
tought
to be protected and the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
taught
ought
consequently
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they believe that need
a gun.
To sum up, on balance I tend to believe that where Suggestion
believe that they need
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time limit
is Suggestion
a time limit
impossed
teenagers could no get drugs or could be robbed set forth authoritatively as obligatory
imposed
easily but
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easily, but
someway
they start to live with more fear and Suggestion
some way
imaging
things that inevitably are form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
watched
on TV or Suggestion
watching
videogames
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video games
thus
, more guns are demanded. But,
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