In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

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Does

curfew

will prevent young people from becoming either perpetrators or victims of nighttime crime? In recent

times

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times, curfew

curfew

have been imposed is some states

from

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the US

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this

means that under no

circunstances

your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)

circumstances

circumstance

are teenagers allowed to be in streets after

certain

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a certain time

time

at night, there is no doubt in my mind that imposing

curfew

have its positive consequences but at the same

time

there are some negative points that need to be mentioned.

Firstly

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although

imposing

curfew

have

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has

their

possitive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

positives

consequences

such

as preventing teenagers from being robbed

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kidnapped or getting drugs and so forth in easy way there is no guarantee that all these risks could be avoided, it should

negation of a word or group of words

not

be forgotten that a large number of crimes are

commited

bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude

committed

during the day, young people can get drugs at school easily and kidnappers do not hesitate when they have an opportunity whatever hour.

For instance

, in past years there have sadly been some gun

shoots

the act of firing a projectile

shots

at schools and those attacks were during morning hours.Unfortunately,

those

plural of "this"

these

incidents

can not

cannot

be prevented

with

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with a curfew

curfew

Secondly

, if in all cities

time

limit were

impossed

set forth authoritatively as obligatory

imposed

impressed

embossed

teenagers they

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teenagers, they

would

started

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start

to live with

fear regardless

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fear, regardless

if their city was secure or not.

For example

recent survey

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a recent survey

indicates that the a large number of

teenager

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teenagers

are feeling

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is feeling

more insecure than before due to the fact that they tend to

believed

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believe

that they are living like a movie story where no one can leave their houses after 10:00pm because there some

extrange

creatures looking for people to eat and they tend to believe that protection is needed

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a gun or something that can be useful for fight against those creatures.

Hence

this

is a huge disadvantage because teenagers are

tought

the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about

thought

taught

ought

to be protected and

consequently

they believe that need

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believe that they need

a gun. To sum up, on balance I tend to believe that where

time limit

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a time limit

impossed

set forth authoritatively as obligatory

imposed

teenagers could no get drugs or could be robbed

easily but

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easily, but

someway

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some way

they start to live with more fear and

imaging

form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case

imagine

things that inevitably are

watched

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watching

on TV or

videogames

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video games

thus

, more guns are demanded. But,

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