Nowadays animal experiments are widely use to develop new medicine and to test the safety of other products. Many people argue that these should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animal to suffer from, while others are in favour of them as they bring move benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It's standard that animal experiments
are widely use
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are widely used
are widely using
to develop
new medicine
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new medicines
a new medicine
for the
safety
of other products many people argue that these should be banned simply because it's morally wrong to cause
animal
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animals
an animal
the animal
to suffer, while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
are in a
favor
promote over another
favour
fever
of them as they move benefits to humanity. In my opinion, the traditional practice should be upheld for the following reasons.
Firstly
, it's much more expensive than alternative and less effective than those safe, harmless other methods that don't harm living creatures.
In other words
, animal experimentation is about 92% ineffective overall, even the animal experiments that are approved have little chance of succeeding when tested on these innocent creatures that haven't done anything to us.
Moreover there
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Moreover, there
are numerous pros and construction of animal testing, the ethical aspect overshadows both of them.
For instance
, the emotion
maybe
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may be
the ultimate
determing
having the power or quality of deciding
determining
factor in whether a person believe the benefits of animal testing outweigh the problem associated with the practice
such
as animal and human are never exactly the same. Another reason for the current practice to be upheld, is that it gives room for researchers to find drug and treatment to various
kind
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kinds
of diseases and
also
gives room to improve health and medicine. Many medical
treatment
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treatments
have been made possible by animal
testing including
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testing, including
cancer and HIV drugs, insulin, antibiotics, vaccines and many more. It
help
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helps
to ensure the
safety
of the drugs and many other substances human
use
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uses
or are exposed to regularly, drugs
in particular
can carry significant dangers with their
use but
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use, but
animal testing allows researchers to
initially
gauge the
safety
thereby reduce human harm and human lives are saved. To sum up, in recent times, animal testing
are predominantly being used
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is predominantly being used
in creating new drug and ascertaining the
safety
of other products. Many people have argued that it's unethical and should be prohibited, because it subject the test subject to pain. Other with a contrary opinion to
this
, say that the benefits to humanity can't be quantified and stated.
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