Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

Educators often decide whether or not to give
homework
to their students. In recent years, people believe that
homework
should not be given whilst others argue that it has a major role in their future education. Both views will be discussed before an opinion is reached. One of the main reasons why parents believe that
homework
should not be given is due to
time
Suggestion
timing
. Many believe that
instead
of spending
time
on
work
that could have been done
in
Suggestion
with
school children
this
time
could be better spent to broaden their horizons.
This
could be doing activities
such
as learning a new instrument or language. Many students do not take up these extra activities as they feel they do not have enough
time
.
However by
Accept comma addition
However, by
taking up an extra activity a child will be able to gain a more holistic education which is essential for the future. Arguably,
homework
can be justified as a means of revision for students. As a child’s mind is still developing, reviewing the
work
done at school encourages them to remember and review what they have learned at school.
For example
, students who do not do
homework
have a harder
time
remembering what they learned compared to students who have completed the
work
set by their teachers.
Furthermore
, the extra
work
they have at home allows them to develop skills
such
as self studying and problem solving which is highly needed in the future. In conclusion,
although
the
time
used for
homework
could be used for something else it is an important factor in helping the child review and grow as a person.
Therefore I
Accept comma addition
Therefore, I
believe that
homework
is
major contributor
Suggestion
a major contributor
in the education of a child.

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