Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
Educators often decide whether or not to give
homework
to their students. In recent years, people believe that homework
should not be given whilst others argue that it has a major role in their future education. Both views will be discussed before an opinion is reached.
One of the main reasons why parents believe that homework
should not be given is due to time
. Many believe that Suggestion
timing
instead
of spending time
on work
that could have been done in
school children Suggestion
with
this
time
could be better spent to broaden their horizons. This
could be doing activities such
as learning a new instrument or language. Many students do not take up these extra activities as they feel they do not have enough time
. However by
taking up an extra activity a child will be able to gain a more holistic education which is essential for the future.
Arguably, Accept comma addition
However, by
homework
can be justified as a means of revision for students. As a child’s mind is still developing, reviewing the work
done at school encourages them to remember and review what they have learned at school. For example
, students who do not do homework
have a harder time
remembering what they learned compared to students who have completed the work
set by their teachers. Furthermore
, the extra work
they have at home allows them to develop skills such
as self studying and problem solving which is highly needed in the future.
In conclusion, although
the time
used for homework
could be used for something else it is an important factor in helping the child review and grow as a person. Therefore I
believe that Accept comma addition
Therefore, I
homework
is major contributor
in the education of a child.Suggestion
a major contributor
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